Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Let's jump ahead to 10th grade...

Here's the first page of an essay on illegal immigration. Solid research, strong facts, mediocre writing at best. But that opening paragraph... eesh. Talk about forcing in a reference to one of my favorite movies (throughout high school and college I would thrive off of opening essays with movie, TV, or musical references... they are nice space-fillers).
Oh yeah, and it verges on being racist.
But at least it got me a 9+ out of 10. Thanks, Mr. Pratt!

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2 comments:

brotherjimmy said...

I beleive our current president also made the same comparrison.

Tommy Himself said...

I believe our current president spells believe and comparison just like brotherjimmy does.